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Review Detail of Nebula_Rayz in My Lover Is A Traitor | A Denki Kaminari Fanfiction

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I like the plot so far, but if you are planning on continuing the story I suggest giving the characters more background. Like, why does Kaminari hate heros. How did he and Yakumo get together. How did he join the league? Things like this. These are questions I would like answers to. So really just develope the characters and setting a little more.

My Lover Is A Traitor | A Denki Kaminari Fanfiction

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