Review Detail of Princess_debbs26 in The second shadow

Item: The second shadow
Rating: 3.2

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The book has typos, but not so bad that you can't understand. I will advise you removing * from the book, because it is used for ungrammatical sentence in Syntax. Feel free to disagree not everyone will know that or agree with me, it is just my opinion as I am a linguist student.

The second shadow

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Actually that's a narration need, later in this story, I'll introduce external thoughts, with different characters. I end up with - People talking. * Keith thinking. * < Other people's thoughts. > Thankfully I don't plan on adding any, three is more than enough

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