Review Detail of Chronosign in Reading: The Ultimate Fruit
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I hope you all like this and I can't thank Imbreak enough for giving permission. I hope that I can present the characters as accurately as I possibly can.
Reading: The Ultimate Fruit
Chronosign
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Chronosign:Your welcome, but I'd like your help with coming up Lucas's line since you made him.
Made two more chapters, I saw your newest on good job. To be honest I thought you were gonna make Sugar fall for him cause the Hobby-Hobby Fruit stops you from aging, then have Lucas use a power similar to Jewelry Bonny to make her look her appropriate age cause he thought that he'd rather have someone twice his age trying to get in bed with him *cough cough* Olivia *cough cough* than someone who looks a little older than his daughter. If she didn't fall for him he could secure her loyalty by turning he older, she must feel very insecure about her size and never hitting puberty.
Made two more chapters, I saw your newest on good job. To be honest I thought you were gonna make Sugar fall for him cause the Hobby-Hobby Fruit stops you from aging, then have Lucas use a power similar to Jewelry Bonny to make her look her appropriate age cause he thought that he'd rather have someone twice his age trying to get in bed with him *cough cough* Olivia *cough cough* than someone who looks a little older than his daughter. If she didn't fall for him he could secure her loyalty by turning he older, she must feel very insecure about her size and never hitting puberty.
Imbreak:thanks man!