Review Detail of JcPancakes in Not perfect enough for Love

Writing Quality: The writing vocabulary is good, with good command on the language to describe expressions and scenes accurately. There are several minor grammatical mistakes throughout the story. Besides that, there are inconsistencies in spacing and capitalization that can be quite distracting. I would also suggest the author to translate the Islamic terminologies such as Assalamualaikum (Peace be upon you) and such for readers not familiar with it for a better reading quality. Stability of Updates: Looking at the history of updates, it is fairly consistent. 5 stars. Story Development: I really like the difference of interest the character has and the connection of it to the past, present and future. The jump between characters can be quite confusing, changing between Nura and Zafar. I find the dual perspective interesting but it can be done better. Maybe give a subtitle before you start? For example, [Nura's POV]. Character Design: Haha, already a rebellious start in the story. I like it, it gives flavour to your characters. The actions your characters have, flashbacks and monologues all contributes to a clear idea on how the character behaves. Well done! 5 stars. World Background: I enjoyed the background of Islamic neighbourhood, the parents disapproval with art and such. However, it wasn't really fleshed on and was cut really short. It feels really one-sided. Why does the parents disapprove on that? Have they tried it, or its because solely on society's expectations? If so, how would they feel about it when she told them about it? Are there fellow artists who had the same situation? How about the biker gang? What do they do besides competing? How are their relationship with the community? Do they fear them, or just impassive? What would happen from that relationship? There are so much to explore besides the interaction between the characters.