Review Detail of ImNex in Pokemon Storm

This is gonna be hard to write since I just had an outburst in one of the paragraph comments. 5 stars for writing quality, 5 stars for stability of updates, 5 stars for story development. Even though author followed canon timeline, MC blends into it rather pleasingly. Character Design is as always, rather complicated. I might be quite rude with my comments but not in reviews. MC for some reason loves pokemons so much like Ash but in a different way. So he's constantly arguing with Ash's carefree behaviour. MC didn't take charmander because he's better than others so he doesn't need a king gene Pokemon. Over all, Mc is a hardworking guy who thinks that all Pokemon trainers need to train so hard like him. If you wanna know how bad it is, I start pitying Ash. Yes, the same Ash who keeps getting lucky wins. MC is quite jealous of that too lol. But this only make me feel that MC is rather not perfect like other main characters. I was more invested in the fanfic that I should have. 5 stars for that. World background is 5 stars since it's pretty much a normal Pokemon world. So overall 5 stars from me. I don't hate or love the story, it's quite different from other stories that follow canon. Just do what you're doing author. It's not easy to write a fanfic but you're doing a great job. You must have already got a lot of complaints so take all my complaints as one of them. Bye.