Review Detail of WriterSovereign in Dark Temptations

Here is my honest review after 20 chapters: Writing quality: I think it's okay. My english is not the best so I won't comment on this too much. It's enjoyable and the grammar is pretty good. Stability of Updates: 12 chapters/week currently which is good. I like to read 2 new chapters every day after work. Story development: This is one of the best elements of this novel in my opinion. Feels a little bit rushed, but surprisingly the author explains everything. Character Design: Not that good. We doesn't know how the MC looks. We only know that he looks good. There is also a girl and we know that she is a beauty that's all. Almost every character got a personality except the MC which is surprising. There are a lot of novels with this type of shallow character design so readers probably got used to it. World Background: It's not that bad. Not detailed, but I think that the novel is enjoyable this way, because you use your imagination. The authors can either create a world full of details or do it this way. Easy and simple. Give some details and the reader can fill the rest on his own. The novel is focused on the story this way. I like it. Some tips: Give the characters more personality! Create more detailed fighting scenes. Also make it more exciting. You revealed his luck from the beginning, I know what will happen and I don't get hyped after reading a chapter. You have to make it more colorful. My overall opinion: This novel is an easy enjoyable read. Simple and you can enjoy it. I gave it 5 stars because I like it, but I think that the current worth of this novel is around 4/5. It's unique in my opinion. Give it a try and you will enjoy it.