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2020-09-27 11:33

Grammar- good... 5 star Update stability- 17 days or 24 days gap between chapter 1 and 2.. 2 star Story Development- well it's just starting but I can already imagine the story... Good author. 4 star Character design-well it's just chapter 2 but I can see hints of the personality in chapter 1... Good author.. 4 star World development- well it's fanfic.. one piece... 4 star A story about a man got betrayed by his girlfriend or shit (cockuled) got revenge because of his creation that is creepy as **** (his zoan fruit).. Got reincarnated in One Piece with zoan fruit.... Overall it's good.... Keep up Author ..

Greatest Zoan

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I think it has potential to become a great novel. Though you need to increase the amount of update. I think it has potential to become a great novel. Though you need to increase the amount of update.

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So, hi, super humble author here. I came to write becuse I’ve read a lot and now its time to put my imagination into words. I put a lot of thought into each word I write and do this to the best of my ability, I might not notice a plot hole. Since I put a lot of mental energy into each chapter it means I get tired. As a result I would say everything should be good except for my update stability between a lack of desire and sometimes be really busy so expect gaps in uploading.

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