You just have to reread your own work, cause most if not all of your spelling errors are just simple fixes. Theirs also that text talk your doin which is really annoying. The character is also annoying, he's a psychopath which I'm fine with but you sometimes make him act emotionally weird. I may have missed it but why did they try to escape he seemed perfectly fine with being there.
LazyZuri
Liked it!
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