Review Detail of NeonPLay250 in Rebirth in Tales of Demons and Gods with a System

starting from the first chapter where the main character is an 80 year old man looking for his love, this is just an attempt to catch up on drama and this is stupid since this is fanfiction. I think new life new opportunities is a good motto. Not to mention that the main character is too strong from the very beginning and there is no feeling of overcoming obstacles. And because of the power of khaki and others, it becomes impossible to immerse yourself in the atmosphere of TDG. As an author, I may wish to learn from mistakes.