Review Detail of ShadedLight in Rebirth in Tales of Demons and Gods with a System
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Reading what you’re writing would be a good way to improve. Nothing is explained or shown, only told. Almost everything is reliant on prior knowledge. Try working on the “don’t tell, show” rule.
Rebirth in Tales of Demons and Gods with a System
Acnologia1234
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ShadedLightLv5ShadedLight
If you’d like me to help you edit some of your chapters, we could do it over discord/share doc etc.. I’m not an expert or anything but I know I can at least improve and correct some of the grammatical error. Plus I have a lot of free time and is bored ;-;
Acnologia1234:Thanks Brother, I will try my best to improve in this part
Acnologia1234AutorAcnologia1234
Thanks for your offer bro. But I am directly writing my novel in Webnovel. And its is also I am doing in my free time bro. But I would like to share my ideas for plotline with you if possible
ShadedLight:If you’d like me to help you edit some of your chapters, we could do it over discord/share doc etc.. I’m not an expert or anything but I know I can at least improve and correct some of the grammatical error. Plus I have a lot of free time and is bored ;-;
ShadedLightLv5ShadedLight
Acnologia1234:Thanks for your offer bro. But I am directly writing my novel in Webnovel. And its is also I am doing in my free time bro. But I would like to share my ideas for plotline with you if possible
