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Review Detail of DarthVegito in Dragon Ball - A Saiyan's Fate

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The story was eh okay until at a point where he is taken as prisoner by king vegeta because he beat his son and is stronger than him. His power level is higher than king vegeta at age 3 but anyways he LETS HIS FAMILY BE TAKEN AND BEATEN IN FRONT IF HIM AND DIES NOTHING. Then he gains “false super saiyan” bullsh*t lol he doesn’t even need that to beat the king or his guards but hey I’m not the author who thinks of the right now and not the future or even the things that make sense. Would rate lower if the beginning wasn’t decent and would’ve rated higher if the author didn’t write chapter 11 I think? Doesn’t matter he ruined the entire story in one chapter bravo 👏

Dragon Ball - A Saiyan's Fate

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Asroon03
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My bad, I see your point I did really rush chapter that without thinking about the future. I added a lot of unnecessary stuff as I stood up past 4 am writing it. That’s why I am going to revised the chapter soon. Thanks for reading and taking time for a review.