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red_grapes
red_grapesLv44yr
2020-07-21 17:49

Writing Quality: Besides the Western novels I've read, this novel might come close to that, when it comes to the author's vocabulary or use of words. This truly deserved a 5-star, great job! Stability of Updating: 5-star for quality over quantity! Story Development: This has been a great read, can't wait for more chapters. 'Cause I'm really interested in this novel! Another 5-star! Character Design: I wanted to give this a 5-star but I would like to learn more about the characters. There's also a lot of characters so it's a little difficult for me to remember all of them, my apologies. I have a little suggestion, you could make an auxiliary chapter about the characters. 4-star for now because there's no feature for a 4.5-star. Will leave a review again after more and more chapters released. World Background: 5-star for a unique world you have here! 4.8/5 for now!

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mrmrcia
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I followed your auxiliary suggestion! Thank you so much! I'm also almost finished with your book! It's a pleasant read :>

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LinShui
LinShuiLv4

With all honesty, I’ve heard rumours of mrmrcia’s use of grammar and how awesome the author’s English skills are, so I prepared myself into reading this with my reading glasses on, a thesaurus and a dictionary open and ready under my fingers, mentally prepped to be wowed out of my mind - I wasn’t disappointed. This is some high fantasy level writing right here. Beautiful prose, vivid imagery and quite immersive even though challenging words are used. And even then it is not disruptive to the reading flow itself. The more difficult words are used in tangent with common phrases, so one can easily grasp the meaning behind it. Very smooth, fluid scene changes and prose. I loved it. I love high fantasy prose, and this one just hits all the right spots for me. The story so far is still in the developing phase as we get to see the world through the councils’ and the emperor’s speech and thought, but it looks promising. Very carefully crafted history and world. Even better, I imagined Cate Blanchett narrating this with her voice to me and it’s just – awesome. :D Hats off to the author, I loved the prose, love the character names, although with all honesty – I had no idea what the chapter names meant before reaching the author’s notes, but they cool, so I don’t mind it. :D This is one of those novels that I love to read in peace and quiet with a hot steaming cup of tea and all the time to spare. High fantasy novels demand me to fully immerse myself in the story, savouring each word and phrase like a sour candy – it hits you hard, but you’ll love every second of it.

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