Review Detail of BansheePanda in Death... and me

Reviewing at chapter 23? Might be 21. Anyway, I want to like this and keep reading. I'm interested in the concept and characters so far, but I just can't get over the way R&R are portrayed. They are NEWBORNS, and here they are moving around like they're already several months old. No one comments on it or is suspicious, as if it's completely normal for a few week old baby to be awake and crawling around. It just really ruins my immersion in the story and I find myself losing interest. Might come back to this story later, but putting it aside for now. Overall, 3.5 - 4 stars.