Review Detail of Amduscias in Doulou Dalu Rise of the Uchiha
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Alright heads up people this isnt a protagonist who knows about dd and reincarnates in dd its about madara reincarnating in dd with the memories of a killer otaku from earth into dd.For some ppl there is no differences but for me specifically,i expected the mc to have dialogues of the dd world because you know ? Reincarnating in a world you've read about is fun and amazing.Instead all we get is the typical situation of madara reincarnating.What would happen ? The typical brooding like "oh hashirama was right should have a family" "Oh i was wrong hashirama " All this regrets about madara.Now i dont know whether author will blatantly switch the perspective back to the otaku killer being somehow in charge later on but it doesnt matter the moment he mention hashirama as a old friend it cemented the fact the story is about madara trying following the old grieving route.So ignore the sypnosis its isnt about a guy from earth reincarnating.
Doulou Dalu Rise of the Uchiha
TheDaoSon
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I'm for the review it helps me understand what's wrong with my story but I would like to add something this isn't Naruto Madara anymore I explain in a chapter when it he no longer will live for either Naruto Madara or earth Sinn he is a new Madara he doesn't have naruto Madaras memories or Sinn memories anymore he'll create new ones you can look at it like they were his Masters and he was a disciple and I don't like stories when the protagonists know the entire story it's boring and bland he won't be able to experience anything new he'll just be some guy following someone else's story and the guy who was reincarnated isn't an otaku he's more casual he works more than he watches But thank for the review again I like these kinds it helps me be a better writer so please if you find any more mistakes tell me so I can better myself TheDaoSon