Review Detail of genit in Harry Potter's Natural Villain-DROPPED!

Item: Harry Potter's Natural Villain-DROPPED!
Rating: 4.6

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genitLv54yrgenit

So far the story is good and well written apart from some grammatical errors. If you really intend togo the harem route, l hope to see some growing pains which all teenagers suffer from ( even if he is an ***** inside, he can't escape hormones or a women's frightening intuition). Would be nice to see him blackmailing his father for more siblings and meeting his cool cousin Tonks. Keep up the good work and updates.

Harry Potter's Natural Villain-DROPPED!

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DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

If he gets a younger brother then Draco can convince his dad to become a Black so then they control both houses

4yr

genitLv5genit

Not what i was thinking. It was more along the lines of patching things up with tonks family and giving upon black so he could get lestrangs vault instead. I have always thought that the goblet of huffelpuff had more to it than meets the eye.

DarthVegito:If he gets a younger brother then Draco can convince his dad to become a Black so then they control both houses

4yr