Review Detail of amaturewriter in Another Life as Older Brother
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U retarded ****....ok ..3 stars..its interesting......the MC has a dope power and its an SI......... now why its retarded.......MC is too sane/ happy/ accepting ..........considering his past......that **** should've ****ed him up badly,,,,,,,basically what I am trying to say is his character is too messy....keep him cold/ apathetic [or atleast something appropriate for someone that went through what he went through]......dont make him too trusting........also considering the power he has [something that should atleast easily be tier 5 without training and tier 1/2 with training] dont neuter him.........give him a personality similar to gil..........add some romance and fluff....just dont make MC a retarded pervert....keep him smart.......build the romance...just no NTR........if harem keep it small..........keep him OP.......also would be better if he isnt in a familia [could pretend to be with bell..........] .............anyway GL,,,,,,,,,,would've been better if the first 2 chps weren't so rushed
Another Life as Older Brother
Rouxk
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why dont you suggest what you like....instead of talking **** about others,,,,,,,,,,,like its right there to review........I write what I'd like..............they are just suggestion...................also read everything..........here unlike the others I want MC to kinda be a bit nuts? or dark because of what happened to him...........keep him OP yes...you saw his ability.........I even explained why it shouldn't be neutered
Skepparn:this reviewer basically copy paste build romance harem keep him op no retard in different words in each and every single review he posts lmao
Skepparn:this reviewer basically copy paste build romance harem keep him op no retard in different words in each and every single review he posts lmao
lordant:Did... did you just hate on a character for being sane and happy?
Eh, autor just want play on troupes and have *cool* mc..... Thinking more than that, is too much of a chore.
Venerable_Read3r:I Mean Considering what happened to him from childhood there's no way he can be trusting or outwardly happy
This is disgusting....i can understand if someoen has suggestions for author ,but downright order him what to do....man write your own than.... i aint mc s biggest fan true but to disreslect others works by telling them how to write it ...agressive aint ya?...
Yuri_is_Ntr:Eh, autor just want play on troupes and have *cool* mc..... Thinking more than that, is too much of a chore.
Beniiboy23:This is disgusting....i can understand if someoen has suggestions for author ,but downright order him what to do....man write your own than.... i aint mc s biggest fan true but to disreslect others works by telling them how to write it ...agressive aint ya?...
I informed the writer, about what he did wrong..the personality dosnt suit MC,,,,,the powers, are messed up...it was a wrong statement...plus I explained why its bad, it was a suggestion...18 people understood that it was a suggestion, compared to the other reviews here I think I was actually helping cause they just bashed,,,,then we have you,,,a piece of **** that just assumes ****, bru you want to be a messiah go comment on the other reviews that bash the author, I just gave some points and said why he wrong,,,honestly because of **** darts like you that always assume a critique is bash is why I always write its a suggestion.....like seriously,,,how stupid are you? ...18..18 people agreed and you are here saying I am aggressive and disrespect the author,,,fucking idiot,,,also learn the spelling,,,dumbass. **; only reason I replied was I just saw this comment today cause of an alert
Beniiboy23:This is disgusting....i can understand if someoen has suggestions for author ,but downright order him what to do....man write your own than.... i aint mc s biggest fan true but to disreslect others works by telling them how to write it ...agressive aint ya?...
Stfu go ride for ur dead nan in the grave, fucking pussy... What about akin author to do this and that... This is a free website...we can do whatever we want... The sole reason this novel even has views is cuz of ppl recommending ideas... Dickhead **** off wiv ur stupid "downright order him" nigga all he did was suggest sumthin
Beniiboy23:This is disgusting....i can understand if someoen has suggestions for author ,but downright order him what to do....man write your own than.... i aint mc s biggest fan true but to disreslect others works by telling them how to write it ...agressive aint ya?...