Review Detail of MoreUmlaut in Blade of Tyranny

Other reviewers are expressing concerns about Mad Snail's update pace. I can't speak to that, but the story itself is a hodge-podge of half-formed ideas. It reads like the author had a bunch of ideas for a story in a VRMMO and just sort of sprinkled them onto a template without considering how they interacted with each other or how to give any one idea enough focus to breathe.