I like the plot and because im another reviewer can you release another chapter im sure we would all apreciate it you developed the character well but i think the chapters could be longer and i didnt get to much of what the dungeon looks like it would help if you could add this detail to your story
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GOSTARConsider it done. Either way, I'll explain what it looks like. The dungeon he is currently in, is dark and eerie. The sides of the dungeon has a greyish stony structure, similar to a cave. The ground below is more or less the dry equivalent of soil, and is dark brown in colour. [New chap releases today. I hope it's as good as the previous ones.]