Review Detail of amaturewriter in Dead Living Summoning System

This is dope...and SI MC with summoning powers...would've preferred if it was like solo leveling but eh...has potential..BUT why the low stars? The chp content is barely a paragraph..over 75 % is stat or info..also author just saying comedy dosnt work ex: like MC forgetting to ask system...that only works in visual scenarios not novels..just like perverted MC's...reading them is always weird.... SUGGESTION DF AND OTHER:....OP MC/smart not perverted or idiot/add romance and fluff but BUILD IT...and AU or atleast make MC start out before cannon so he'll be some bigshot by the time of luffy...and no joining luffy pls no..if harem keep it small..also world travel but years before cannon DF IDEA: normally I'd suggest some OP DF like enels or a dragon mythical zoan modified version like ONI or ACHNOLOGIA..think of it..MC could become achnologia and just make one piece and every other world kneel before him,,,BUT give MC a DF like SUGAR something like a hobby hobby no mi??? like MC could change things and people in animals? or robots? could be interesting or give MC the bomb bomb fruit,,,,that DF has the most potential compared to any other..almost like enru;s.like MC could create explosions at an atomic level or universal????