Adorable main character! She has powers! Reading about what she does, thinks, and says is enjoyable! Backstory is introduced well, is well-organized, easy to read, complex enough to be interesting, while simple enough to be memorable. Grammar and action-sequencing is excellent! We're building up in the first several chapters, and I have no idea where we're going, but it should be quite fun! Looking forward to more, Author!
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