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Review Detail of Li_Yi_Wei in Marry Me, Miss Villainess

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I have read up to 7 ch so far and im hoping the author can read this because I have some feedback about the book's grammar and whatnot Its so far pretty well (and I hope Arianna will end up with Yago cuz in my opinion he better than Jayden but anyways not the main point) but some things are that I can see sometimes the author mistaken "him" to "her" vice versa and "her" to "he" vice versa so I suggest having an editor to check on it (I would do it but I am tired rn lol cuz I usually give corrections myself to help authors tho I can help later if you need it) and I think there may be small grammar mistakes not sure I usually correct any small issues in my head anyways besides those errors I think this novel is really good so far! keep it up!

Marry Me, Miss Villainess

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