Review Detail of amaturewriter in Harry Potter and the Bloodline Madness

I read the first chapter and was already interested..... suggestion: just dont make this some angsty, tragic dark ****......keep light..maybe a bit dark...add some romance..but dont make the lovers cheat or choose someone taken..its stupid....add some fluff too....make MC Op...and a one man army type.... do tell if the novels going to be like whats mentioned above or not... just dont make this some angst and tragic ****...