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OK I don't know if this should count as spoiler but I don't like how's he so so caring I know he's a good guy but still the character development is not there really like make his sis die some how and maybe he's friends IDK about his friends but lost would make him colder and more mature sometimes all I'm saying the story is too happy for the stuff that's happening and he's kinda weak he relies on the system way too much it's his power but really man there's no deep meaning really everyone is still treating it to lightly in a way you know all I'm saying is his character is too nice and flawed sometimes
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Thanks for the input I would try to develop each character's personality more on a later chapter. But, bear in mind that the setting of my novel is that the MC and his friend are genuine young adults and so the mature personality would have to come later on. I understand that most novel that writes similar background usually have a reincarnated MC or MC that turn young again so they have the strong characteristic of a survivor and can act decisively about any given situation. Then again my novel is tagged as a slow-paced novel and this is still in the tutorial village stage. It would escalate later on when they start to go into the Eden world but nevertheless. Thank you for the constructive critics.
Yeah it's alright it makes more sense now from you explaining they are young adults and the new world they live in is relatively new so it does make sense they are taking things with stride adapting fairly quickly they accepted the fact so so fast that everything they knew is the opposite or different now
Yeah I also try to cover a bunch of plot holes by setting the world a bit in the future and by explaining most of the world conditions in early chapter. But I didnt delve around too much as the story would progress even slower if I did. I use the 1st alpha tester and make them into heroes (taking an inspiration from my hero academia anime) to make it seems normal for them gaining ability, etc
23dark:Yeah it's alright it makes more sense now from you explaining they are young adults and the new world they live in is relatively new so it does make sense they are taking things with stride adapting fairly quickly they accepted the fact so so fast that everything they knew is the opposite or different now
