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Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Kingdoms Of Elaria

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv44yrMel_Aniv

My fellow Fantasy writer! hello! I'm amazed with your work I will give 5 stars couze I know how hard it is to write! If you want advises well maybe I can suggest You can make it in paragraphs so it will be easier to read that's all I can say and make use of (" ") when it is a dialogue

Kingdoms Of Elaria

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roy2809
roy2809Autorroy2809

Will do man. Thanks for the suggestions. I'll edit the story ri8 away.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Actually It is my problem too at the start then someone made a suggestion to me Well I'm happy to help