Review Detail of PandaWanKenobi in Undeath Emperor In Another World

Thx!! i agree with what you said, this story has a lot of potential and if i do it right, i could get top 50 after a very long time. But i feel like i rushed the class training time when they just arrived. what do you think about it?

You didn’t rush the trainings, as i seen something similar to this like arifureta. Also it depends on how you created the world’s beliefs like the king is crafty and sly that use words to manipulate his force training on the hero.

Also its only been 2 days and there is a 800 view increase at least from what i viewed so chances of getting viewed is probably rising, only lacks time and on how system of Webnovel work as there are too many (another world)name but only a few of them stay behind and continue