Review Detail of WinterLeaf in Abluvion

The first person perspective in your novel is well blended with the storyline that you build. As the characters are dealing with the aftermath of the apocalypse, I can say that your story is marvellous. It's just your story is too 'short' that I find it hard to emphasize on some moments (Only some. Others are done beautifully). If you can make it a bit longer and add some details at certain points, I believe that it'll be emotionally great.