Item: Heaven Devouring System
Rating: 5

Im_jealousLv45yr

2019-06-28 22:20

Edit synopsis my friend, you have made lot of grammatical mistakes. People now a days are judging novel based on its synopsis, they won't read a novel if your synopsis have lot of errors.

Heaven Devouring System

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