Review Detail of SeaVen in Marvel: The Convergence of Souls

It is too messy... too much character(alternate personality) wc causes disorder and aome useless names that will never be use again .... base on what i read wirhout the authors explaination... he can use the power or ability of those alter persona...thats 1 mess-its too OP .. .. second, the author aki** a lot ... i mean every chapter is written like a "Summary" ... .. .. Third, the author LACKS "explaination" which is important for WORLD BUILDING ... like the MCs ability ... .. .. 4th, those characters was not build "ENOUGH" to be consider a "Personality" ... those are just Dialogue -_- ... i hope u improve base on my review ... its MESSY and TOO MUCH is "always" bad. -_-