Review Detail of Akros_Zero in Fate Past Heaven

So where to begin? From your writing I can see you are a fairly new to writing, the story is cliche and well a bit badly developed. But it's interesting to read. The real review I will give this fic is 3 stars. But I am giving 5 stars to boost your morale, I hope you can improve your writing skills and publish good and interesting stories one day. Don't worry everyone stars like this, you will soon get a lot of hate and heavy criticism as well. It's okay to get angry from them, afterall you are a human, but well important thing is you preserve. Even if someone says to stop writing, if you feel like to continue writing then don't listen to them.