Review Detail of Hamzable in I Accidentally Stole a God
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Hrmm... I don't really know what to say. Personally, I dislike Eastern Fantasy nowadays, mainly because of the over-saturation (you had one job, Webnovel), but this one is decent, I guess? By decent, of course, I mean probably the best quality original Eastern Fantasy I've read on this site. There are a few tidbits that had me cringing, but again, it was probably my natural aversion at play. Writing quality: 5/5. It would be oh-so-great if everyone on Webnovel had Track's eloquence. Occasional grammar errors, but nothing that the "normal" reader would notice. Stability of Updates: 4/5. Honestly, it's pretty stable--it's just the rate of releases that falls short. I'm tempted to give it a 5, but Webnovel emphasizes quantity over quality. Story Development: 4/5. Again, natural aversion. Character Design: 4/5. IMO, not enough cast so far, and pretty stock-standard character tropes if you ask me. Sure, they work and are fleshed out, but seem to fall flat thanks to their genericness? World Background: 5/5. There's not much to comment about the world, since it is an Eastern Fantasy. The one thing that brought it up to 5/5 would be the way the little snippets of info are sprinkled into the text like a good dash of salt and pepper on a juicy steak. Really good sh*t. Anyway, Track's a good writer. Total score is 4.4.
I Accidentally Stole a God
Namake
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Haha yeah, it'll be much better in its finished state. Also, this is my first novel. I've been focusing a lot on the characterization, but it's good to hear I have a long way to go. Thanks for the feedback man.
Hamzable:I should add, discovery writers completely baffle me. What goes on in those heads of theirs? Alas, it probably means that I'll have to re-read the first volume when Track revises it.
The characterization is already pretty good (better than most others, kek). Again, tropes, yada yada, blah blah. It really depends on whether you want a more epic fantasy or a heroic fantasy for cast size. What you have right now is perfectly fine for a heroic fantasy.
Namake:Haha yeah, it'll be much better in its finished state. Also, this is my first novel. I've been focusing a lot on the characterization, but it's good to hear I have a long way to go. Thanks for the feedback man.
Well, I was wanting to have pretty epic scale, but we’re still in early days. I’m trying to introduce the characters slow enough that people can get accustomed to them.
Hamzable:The characterization is already pretty good (better than most others, kek). Again, tropes, yada yada, blah blah. It really depends on whether you want a more epic fantasy or a heroic fantasy for cast size. What you have right now is perfectly fine for a heroic fantasy.
Namake:Well, I was wanting to have pretty epic scale, but we’re still in early days. I’m trying to introduce the characters slow enough that people can get accustomed to them.