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Review Detail of Lappidappi in I Accidentally Stole a God

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I don’t like or really dislike your writing style. Your descriptions are detailed and your sentences flow nicely into each other making it pleasant to read. Sadly the writing is not quite my cup of tea, I can’t put my finger onto the reason for it so it’s hard for me to give a feedback in this part; still 5/5 stars. Stability of the updates are in my opinion not fast but neither slow; 4/5 stars. I can’t say much to the development of the story yet, with only reading till chapter 5, but I can say that the story feels fast paced and well thought out. I could feel that the author had a plan in mind while writing of how he wanted to mold the story. However similar to the writing, where I couldn’t find a real fault I don’t feel the desire of continuing to read the story. The first chapter made me feel as part of the world and it’s people exiting me and making me worry for the MC, but with the start of the second chapter I lost my interest fast. I mainly attribute this to the next point characters; 4/5 stars. The character design for me was the biggest flaw in this novel I just couldn’t see myself in the role of the main character. I found his motives lacking and questionable from moment one. He is an interesting character but his personality has no realistic background to make him believable; 3/5 World background was good. Even with the the worlds system being overused in other novels the author successfully build an authentic world. Still I am bored to read about similar worlds in different novels again and again, which is only my personal preference, which is why I give; 4/5 stars. In conclusion a well thought out story and world with writing that makes you forget the time while reading. The characters could be better not to say they are bad. In the end my preference makes me uninterested in continuing to read the novel. BUT it’s definitely one of the best original novels I have read till now. 10/10 WORTH TRYING.

I Accidentally Stole a God

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Thanks for the feedback! I've definitely been wanting to revise those first few chapters, but as a discovery writer I know I have to finish the volume before I do that haha. Will keep this in mind for when that day comes.