Review Detail of ZEROtheHERO2603 in I'm Kazuto Kirigaya

In my own opinion the story so far is fine and well. I don’t see anything that leaves any big or major plot holes and to those who say using ‘plot’ to direct the story with the system then what about all the other novels in website that does it. The grammar is actually quite good and so far had little mistake. The story itself is starting off original with Kirito trying to improve his relationship with Suguha and later in actually helping Klein and his friends. Not many fanfic does that and instead just skip all that over to the immediate 2 year timeskip to meet Asuna. While I do agree that the personality could use a bit of a work with the help of dialogue but the fact that there is personality at all is a good starting point. Many novels or fanfic I’ve read just put in character A in one situation then oh wow character A gets out of it and the rest of time is spent basically monologging the whole stuff without putting in any effort to show the characteristics of a character. People complain about the lack of world building and all but while it would be nice to get one. It is not necessary to actual story as this is a fanfic based on media in which you should already know or informed of. You would not be here if you haven’t watched the show or even the first episode of SAO and you wouldn’t need much world building to actually understand the mechanics of the this world. Point is if you’re here then that means you’ve already watched the show and don’t need to know how the world works and if you haven’t watched the show then what are you even doing here. Okay now that’s done here’s what I find stupid. The author bashing. Like wtf. People saying stupid **** about the author here and there and judging the author from the way he/she write the author notes and he/she behavior in dialogue. Look everyone has their own different opinion on stuff and if you don’t like the fanfic so far then stop reading this and go read something else instead of *****ing around here. People keep on insulting the author and all and how the author is perverted or secretly a fat guy and all but that’s just stupid. Why does that matter much and I can’t see how the author is supposedly prevented by reading the story so far. If you think this is perverted then buddy you don’t know how far the rabbit hole goes. Now for people who’s judging how the author act with the ‘nyaa’ and all that. Why does it matter much and if you’re that disturb by it then just go read something else. Who are you to judge someone on how they act or what kind of persona they put on the internet. Like you yourself haven’t that before either in the web or irl. Sorry for the rant and all but I’m sick of all the author bashing and people thinking their entitled and all to demand things like they own it. I personally think the story is fine so far and while it could be improved on. There isn’t much of anything bad about the novel so far and I hope that it continues updating or moved to website such as Wattpad as the community there isn’t as terrible as it is here. Really should btw.