Review Detail of Nitrox2 in Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon

A sub-par harry potter fanfiction, but enjoyable anyway. There is a lot of problem in this story (too many to list them all) but it is normal as it's the first story of the author. It's frustrating because the story could have been so much better that what it is actually. If you like HP FF give it a try, you could be surprised.