Review Detail of BadKrow in Profane Prince of Domination

You might not know me, but paragon does. Why you might ask? I'm the person who convinced him to change the cover and title of the story! Outside of a lot of authors paragon has managed to create a story that has real plot despite being r-18. Hell he could probably turn his novel into a eroge at this point that is how fluid his story has become. He plans out his story before he writes them. The pacing in the story has improved and he is able to constantly keep us on our toes which makes us want to read even more! The best part is hes able to update daily despite his busy schedule. I don't have much negative things to say, mainly because if I find something that might be a potential plot-hole he always able explain his train thought and tells me I just need to wait several dozen chapters to get my answer. If there is something I'd nitpick on is the fact he still hasn't dedicated a few chapters to that milf orgy he promised me. *cough cough*