Review Detail of Macharonni in The Great Journey With a System

The story was going pretty well in the beginning and I liked the concept of the system and the powers, but honestly the Mc is incredibly annoying. He basically sets up future problems for himself by making Yun Che his enemy and starts giving away op powers to people without much of a relationship. Everything seems so forced and at a certain point the Mc gets way too confident that it’s sickening. Like his relationships with every girl in the story is so cringe. There’s only any real character development with the Mc and it’s very small. Every girls personality is a run down version of ATG and having no depth. I will say that the writing quality was quite standard and easy to read, but there was definitely a lack of detail and originality that could have made this story a lot better.