Review Detail of FiReD in Greed King (One Piece Fanfiction)

This novel is unreadable, one may read it at a glance and understand the gist of it. But it's fine if it happens once or twice but for Christ's sake, have some effort, fix it, I took a peek on the latest chapter, chapter 28? the quality of writing is still horrible, have mercy to us readers. My advice is to study some basic grammar or basic essay writing (it really helps) or just install a proofread application (e.g. Grammarly). SU you update regularly quite nice, got no beef with it if only the writing is nice :(, SD the development is quite fast, your only in chapter 28 and he's already overpowered, what will happen at chapter 50? will he become a king of the world? or destroy the universe? well is your story, it's just that, it's way too fast. CD is quite interesting at least, if only you put it more depth not rushing things. WD is understandable, it's not the writer original created world, it is a fanfic, the writer fantasies, that I always like to read except if the quality of the writing is really bad. (I might change my review in the future depending on the writer, I thought it is quite good due to its high rating. I felt being fooled by such rating)