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Review Detail of Uesama in Greed King (One Piece Fanfiction)

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Thanks for the hard work!!! 👍👏👏 Will be honest here!! ✌ the storylines really good and i appreciate it since you didn't follow canon like others similar fanfic ang the concept also interesting 👏 The mc not op and start from the bottom of hierarchy with upside and downside development you make him stronger, and that way it greatly appreciated 👏 Well for others character, i don't how should i say but you didn't develop them with mc such as fight and become stronger together... My suggestion - i don't know if you care with details in story or not, but sometimes one details chapter will help a lot for chapters ahead of it

Greed King (One Piece Fanfiction)

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