The story goes around well but I feel the author needs to be working much more on the spelling and could see that there are too many characters confusing a little but all are portrayed in a very well manner. Also needs to be working on the tenses. Otherwise the story is going great with around Ira and Shiv. 👍
Yuukiko
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