Review Detail of ImBloo in Rogue Immortal: Immortal Rise From The Coffin, Back To Zero.

My honest thoughts: Writing quality: 3/5 - Incorrect use of Punctuation. A lot of words in the middle of the sentences are capitalized. - Strange and inconsistent use of single quotes and double quotes: 'World', ''Moon Light'', 'Sky'. Sometimes conversations don't get quotes. Other times, action descriptions are put in quotes: ''After she jumped down from the bed Ye Ruoxie didn't panic, but adjusted her dress and hair, afterward she looked at the fainted maid.'' You should work out a rule and stick with it. Story 3/5 - Spirit, Array, Awakening, etc. The story seems to require some knowledge of xianxia or wuxia tropes and concepts. But you should restrain yourself. Don't throw new terminologies left and right without context or explanation. Character 2/5 - I don't like any of the characters. They don't seem to have any motivation or personality. But that's just me. World BG 3/5 (?) - The world is confusing. Cultivation is the norm here, but you referenced KFC and so on.