Review Detail of Beltways in Liberum Mundi

Well to tell you the truth, I'm Newbie and just started 2 days ago. This novel is what I wrote to pass my time and express what I have in mind for stories I've been bottling in my head so. If you love or like it then thank you very much or if you hate it and despise it than I thank your honest feeling for me. If there is any grammatical or capitalization error I can fix please comment in the chapter comments so I may fix and Improve. P.S Thank you for taking your time to read my novel and comment