Review Detail of finseybar22 in REINCARNATION OF A SUPERSTAR (BL)

I have only read one chapter so far so I will be sure to update this review in the future The grammar spelling mistakes incorrect words etc break the flow of the story as I have to stop myself sometimes and try and figure out what is actually being said I also feel that the first chapter moves very quickly with very little world building or any build up whatsoever which I feel is necessary since unlike quick wear world hopping novels this is different I appreciate that the authors first language isn’t English however the use of an editor or someone to look it over and make sure that the errors are caught and remedied would make this story much better