Review Detail of CrimsonDarkLord in In Danmachi With A system

The update is slow. The writing style the author use is basic it's not bad but he alway put a name to who's taking. It's like speech bullbles use in comics and manga. Atless in the manga it not as noticeable, but when you put names in every dialogue it's lame and boring. To Author: USE indicating words then names, show not tell everytime.