Review Detail of JSJJ in Endless Universes - Phoenix Rebirth Path - The 4325th
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The writing quality of the reincarnation arcs are vastly superior to the quality of the first few chapters. The story about how each reincarnation's wish fulfillment is heartwarming. Storu development is also at an appreciable level. Master Rabbink, keep up the GOOD Work!!!!!! The character building is quite good. World design is done in a sufficient mannet since only a small amount of time is spent in each arc
Endless Universes - Phoenix Rebirth Path - The 4325th
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Thank you! Having limited chapters for each arc (I aim for around 5~7) make thing rushed... That is the challenge, sometimes I wanted to 'go deeper' on some events while trying 'new'. However, lately, this Rabbink is preoccupied with making stock chapters for my main novel and Earth life's work. This novel is waiting for both a right contest which inspired this Rabbink and a free time.