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Review Detail of CCME in Elementals: Fire and Wind

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Well, the story is good but some sentences is vague, it feels incomplete like caramel colour to olive something? It feels vague but my instinct tells me its the eyes since Raven's brother hair color has been explained. 😂 so yeah, some sentences feels off and I almost cry about Raven's mother case. Try a little to explain so it's clear for us. Well, the story is good but my instinct tells me Raven and her brother is the reincarnation of the legends in the storg 😂😝

Elementals: Fire and Wind

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