Review Detail of Wum8oRum8o in The Potato God Of Time And Space

To be honest, I get that you are trying to make a story full of comedy about the growing cheat known as the potato god, but can you make it have a bit more sense. Usually, when a being is born, it is curious about its surroundings as It will slowly get smarter as time passes. But you suddenly jump to terms such as that only a ******** area wee-a-boo would say and this becomes unfitting for the situation. I do not mind if you don't clarify why the potato has been those thoughts later on but please keep in mind about making the novel Have more sense please.