Review Detail of RPGrinders in Virtual Reality - Rebirth Of The Apocalypse Gears

The idea/summary of your story hooked me so here I am writing a review. I want you/author of this book to continue this idea on how everything will turn out. Please don't give up just yet, make at least ten or so chapters and let readers get a feel for it then decide if you want to give up... mostly at chapter 1, authors will usually give up but please don't give up this idea I yours nor will I... a chapter a week is already good for me.