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Review Detail of Hexlord in Martial Empress!

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Hexlord
HexlordLv116yrHexlord

--Female Martial Empress-- Why did the author put the word "Female" when Empress already hints the protagonist is a SHE? I find the idea entertaining, I see potential - but it's still raw. " A Martial Art Prodigy/God of War killed himself over failed romance and reincarnated as a ~female~ in a low tide Realm. And some time after while still in denial of his gender caught the eye of a Sect recruiter. She then brought "her" to the sect where everyone is ogling and a haughty patriarch that wants "her" in his harem. Oh My " The writing needs a lot of work. I hope the sto take inspiration in World Building from I wish to read this again when it's mature.

Martial Empress!

Zephnir

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Hexlord
HexlordLv11Hexlord

I hope the story would take some inspiration from Emperor 's Dominance and Library of Heaven's Path.

chitatos
chitatosLv4chitatos

Its really confusing story

Hexlord
HexlordLv11Hexlord

Yes, it is confusing story, but in the author's mind it's quite clear - so problem lays in the author's misperception on how readers builds the World Story as they articulate through sentences by sentences.

chitatos:Its really confusing story