SPECTRALE

i approve MAX!!!!!

starting chapter 6 the writing quality dropped considerably and it became hard to fully understand the story and go with its flow, it started being more MTL, a shame since it started great and the story was interesting

why write the synopsis in english if the story is in spanish .......................................................................................................................................................................

why did the writing quality drop so suddenly ??

it's still early in the story, so you can change it, you can maybe not make it an instant mastery of jutsu, he can know the jutsu but he needs to practice and master it step by step, giving him everything at the start is boring most of the time and you hit a writer block easy.

which ordinary person get 3k to 4k $ net, i really would like to meet them

the contract ability is good and has a lot of potential, but why only females, is it like a harem thingy, if it was a problem with limitations there are many that you could apply, so why limit it only to females.

what is wrong with that, if i had the possibility I would

I don't know if the author deletes negative reviews, but the grammar is awful, it is barely readable. I suggest a rewrite because the sentences don't make sense.

one eye can lock space; like in an area nothing can move, and there is a price to pay so he could move things inside like it takes too much energy the second eye should be able to enhance his genjutsu since it has become an important part of his fighting style, so maybe projecting illusions into reality