Woshi

The discussion between the guardians of the globe and Cecil and immortal could have been more in depth. It feels like the reasoning is being parroted the same way. It's a bullet point list rather than drawing up scenarios or questioning what freedom is being lost, what their specific concerns are. It all seems so broad and it makes it hard to believe considering the background changes doesn't show, only tells in a few statements.

Pretty good but not as hype as people make it out to be. Story development is alright but nothing ground breaking. Only interesting change is the dynamic between Rize but it's dragging out and the other relationships are predictable and typical. Updates are steady, 1 daily, but for how ranked this novel is and for a translated novel its pretty poor in comparison to others. Translator is cringe

A very well done novel catered with great care from the translator. The MC is very likeable, chill, and the dynamic between him and other characters is a pleasant read. Heavily consider supporting the translator on Patreon. $13 is a steal for 5-10+ chapters daily.

Chapter 15,17. Smut scenes aren't really that sensual, there's no buildup, and doesn't really read like a smut scene, it reads monotone. But I don't really care for the smut scenes too much. The first half generated no interest for me to read the story further. The setup could've been more refined, like the beginning could've been condensed to add more mystery on to what he did in the old world, slowly revealed over time. The novel didn't really feel like an overlord fanfiction/story, it read like a generic Isekai story.

It's one of the most basic overlord fanfics I've had the displeasure of reading. There's nothing gripping about the story for the first 15 chapters (which at the time of this review is half of the chapters). It's basically a log of what he does with no innovation or desire to expand. A disservice to the original characters and the original work. The smut isn't even that good, imagine having to use emojis for a smut scene. (Also, if he's going to be this overpowered what's the point in going to the new world, at least if he went to different worlds it would be more interesting)

On the second part, for more clarification, there were a series of chapters from around 80 up with the issue and I assumed it extended to the newly updated chapter as it had the same format but around chapter 95 the format stopped using italicization. Bless.

Great story with a likeable MC and good story direction. I found many parts funny and heartwarming. There are sad moments in the novel but equally happy moments, regardless sad moments don't really stay there for long. I would say the story is worth supporting the translator + good pricing. The reason why this isn't five stars is the person translating this is great, good pace, good flow, but please for the love of god stop italicizing dialogue and don't be afraid of paragraphs, not everything needs to be its own singular line. These changes to recent chapters makes it hard/difficult to read.

I remember reading this story from fanfiction a few years ago and I'm surprised to see it appearing here in webnovel. I remember the story being well written and interesting having to do with uh, unconventional beings. Definitely give it a read!

Group chat members.

Then all the more respect to the translator for putting up with it. Makes the story enjoyable to read.