Golden_Eye_Dark

Okay, so I had to find the original and use Qwen 2.5 max to translate it chapter by chapter because jesus fucking christ all the existing translated posts SUCK! This novel is good! But the scientific understanding of the author is well.... below 9th grade on average, with almost zero biology knowledge base and extremely loonytoons levels of misinformed physics. Such as Time dealation due to speed. For example, I want you to imagine how you'd explain how the sun works to a 5yo. Now stop, and realize what you just said was batshit stupid not at all how it works even a little bit. THAT is Schrodinger's cat. Schrodinger's cat is a "tell it to me like I'm 5" dumbed down way of explaining probabilities and how they define reality. It's not at all how it ACTUALLY works 1 to 1. But this author's understanding of physics is apparently Entirely nothing but "tell it to me like I'm 5" but they took it all 100% literally and actually believe those were 1 to 1 explanations of reality. Also they like using Time fractions a lot like "the bullet fired at 1.5 times the speed of sound arrived in 0.1 seconds, but so-n-so managed to cast a spell!" Keep in mind, these are NORMAL "humans", with NORMAL nervous systems. The author even said so, explicitly calling out the speed of how fast signals travel to and from the brain being only 250 kilometers per second. So yeah, It's actually super deep in the category of "don't think about it" novels. And for the love of god, do not take anything said as actual science or literally how reality works at all. Other than that, I'm enjoying it enough to manually copy paste it chapter by chapter into an LLM that takes nearly a minute just to translate each chapter.

it also misgenders characters a lot.

i assume re:zero is not your cup of tea eh...

Chapter 8, Dude really just let the AI write the whole fucking thing. "you'll never belong here!" oh no! my heart, it struck a cord, will I ever belong, I'm a monster, an outsider, waaaah! Beep boop this is what humans feel when they are rejected right? MC literally has zero reason to care what these two are saying.

AI generated warning! At first I thought it was just an inexperienced incel coomer writing this, but in chapter 6 it becomes 110% apparent this was AI generated from the very beginning. Which makes the stomach bulge comment and overly specific body ogling even worse because that kind of stuff requires you to be highly specific and repetitive with your instructions to the AI.

okay real review now. Clearly AI generated. Not even questionable, this is 100% AI. Also, in the English language, adding an A to the beginning of an existing word, like rune, means "non-rune". Athiest means "non-thiest", Abaseball player means "non-baseball player". Really lazy to just tack an A onto a cool word like rune and call it cosher. Okay enough of this rambling. But seriously though, 110% AI generated. The writing states things that are implied out loud and double explains them in the same introduction. Not a quote, but its like this. "Jim was different, he was different in more ways then one, his secret is he wasn't from here, No one knew he wasn't from here, he had a special secrete." This is the kinda slop AI does all the time.

Literally only writing a review in response to the summery / "about" page. "But as he ascends, Leon faces a profound question: in a world where power is everything, will he stay true to his charitable heart, or be tempted to exploit the system for himself?" HAVE YOU NEVER HEARD OF PAVLOV! WHAT DO YOU FUCKING MEAN! Dude literally gets rewarded for doing good non-stop. See a starving orphan? Ring that bell Pavlov.

As someone who has read over 600 chapters of this garbage. DO NOT READ! The mc is the single dumbest person you can possibly imagine. No, really, try to think of the dumbest possible thing you can do with power, are you doing it? No, nothing like making fart jokes or turning things into ducks because lol so random. No I mean legit stupidity. Okay, are you trying? Try harder! because trust me, it's not nearly as stupid as what this guy does.